Thursday, November 1, 2012

Untitled Bits and Bites

A few sections of Untitled that I've been working on. I've more or less finished re-writing episode five and am currently extended episode 6.
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The coming and going of the surf is what woke him up. He stood up slowly, gathering his bearings. He was naked. He was on a beach. A mask lay in the sand a short distance beside him. He picked it up, fitting it over his face. Now he was clothed. He knew what he had to do.


Elsewhere in time and space, a man and a woman spoke in a darkened room. A desktop lamp was the only source of light.
“Well, that’s everything.” The man said.
“Jesus, that’s a thick file.” The woman replied, impressed.
“A lot of stuff happened. You know how many interviews we had to conduct, how we had to fight for every scrap of information.”
“And now it’s going to be stuck in a filing cabinet to gather dust?”
“That’s right. It’s kind of a shame.”
The woman sighed.
“Well, what are you going to do? Another day, another dollar. What are we going to call it?”
“Is there really one name you could give to something like this?”
“I think it’d be an even bigger shame to leave it as “REPORT NUMBER FOUR ZERO ZERO FOUR”
“That’s true… in that case, I think there’s only one word that could sum all of this shit up.”
“What’s that?”

UNTITLED
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 So this is essentially the prologue to the work. I figure the masked man (Catalyst, his name might be) needed an earlier appearance so that people aren't as confused when he shows up later. It's also part of the explanation for the novel's title.

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Surrounded by winds of an imminent winter, two teenagers stood in front of a prefabricated, nearly windowless slab of concrete. Much of the multi-storied building was covered up by a giant poster.
CITIZENS!
DO YOUR DUTY FOR YOUR WORLD AND THE CONFEDERACY!
DESTROY THE TRANS-GALACTIC MENACE!
On the poster, a stern-faced confederate marine thrust out a black gloved hand at the audience, beckoning them towards him. Above and behind him, a blood red wheel floated ominously. DSC-branded rifles pointed outward from the edges of the poster, aimed at the threatening Wheel. One of the teenagers, a boy, sighed. The other, a girl, looked at him with concern. The boy was tall, standing a head higher than the girl. His deep brown eyes matched his long brown hair perfectly, today mostly hidden under a toque. His jacket, dark grey, was fully buttoned, stopping just above his knees where it revealed white pants and boots. The girl’s black, shoulder-length hair covered her left eye, restrained by a pair of white earmuffs, matching her long white coat. Her eyes, bright blue, contrasted starkly with her pale skin.
“We can’t put it off anymore.” She said to him. The sound of her voice came over to him slowly, calmly, whispered words on a winter wind. The boy bowed his head.
“Seventeen…” He mumbled, raising his head, staring with contempt at the marine on the poster. “They made it seventeen…”
“Today’s the last day.” She said, lightly tugging on his arm. “We’ve gotta go.”
“Son of a bitch.” He muttered, walking with the girl towards the recruitment office. The blowing snow overtook them, taking the girl away and bringing the boy hurtling back into the tumultuous present.
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This is a flashback in episode 2. A young Jay and a *~mysterious~* girl are conscripted into the Confederate Army. This is part of a series of flashbacks to flesh out Jay's character and his past - which is going to be expanded on much further in the mythical episode 7. 

I'll post some more of these tomorrow.

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