Saturday, December 31, 2011

Untitled: Episode 2 Part 3

Hey, it's time for the finale of Episode 2. It's long, but worth it. Hold on to your butts!
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Солнце светит, но не греет.

Garrett squinted into the distance. Storm clouds were gathering in the east. A cold wind was blowing from the north.  The rebels were being pushed back in the south.  Since the air cavalry had arrived and the Retale planetary defense had been mobilized the counterinsurgency was proceeding smoothly. The few DSC on the planet when the uprising began were initially overwhelmed (as, Garrett remembered, had happened to him two weeks ago) and pushed back all the way to the Caroe Islands, the border between North and South. Then the Retalan planetary defense was scrambled and the rebels had been in retreat ever since. Garrett, as the highest ranking officer, was the head of all military operations on Retale. Today, he led a troop of mixed DSC and Retalan troops, heading eastwards.

He stood at the height of a hill, staring out at a vast, empty landscape. The countryside was hills and valleys all the way down to the eastern ocean. He lowered the binocs and looked over his shoulder at the mountains he and his troops had spent the previous day climbing. Turning back around, he set his hands on his hips and took in a deep breath. The wind whipped around his scarf, but his uniform kept him warm. His sword clattered against his pant leg. He started down the hill, back towards the village.

Garrett and his portion of the RPD alongside his DSC soldiers had been on a blitz for the past week, but nearly 300 hours of nonstop advances would tire out even the hardest marines. Today, they rested. They had set up camp in and around a small South Retalan village. The village itself was a beauty, a picturesque little item built around a river. Farm plots dotted the surrounding countryside. In South Retale, this was one of the two types of settlements you found. The other half was densely populated industrial sectors filled with sprawling factories. Garrett preferred the rural kind, but it was soon to be an endangered species.

The DSC had set up a few of its tents inside the village, but the majority were back west of it. Mostly a tactical move, so that they could fortify the town to defend themselves in case the enemy counterattacked. Of course, the residents would not be pleased, but then again this town had pledged loyalty to the DSC when Garrett’s company had pushed the South Retalan rebels out.

RPD strolled eastwards through the village as Garrett strolled west. Few civilians walked the narrow, cobblestone streets. On his way back to the DSC encampment, Garrett ran a mental check – Keyhearth and Beybluff and Leminster and Alswold (where he was now), and the next town on the list was Caulfield, South Retale.

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Caulfield, South Retale. A helicopter passed overhead.

Jay started out of sleep, awoken by the sound of two explosions, seemingly just outside of his accommodation. Throwing on a ragged tee and some grey cargo pants he exited his tent to the sight of two DSC helicopters speeding a couple of meters above his head. Looking further up, he witnessed something quite peculiar.

Two of the three DSC ships, a frigate and a Battlecruiser, that had been in Retale’s orbit for the past two weeks were warping out of the system, their drives tearing into the fourth dimension and sucking them into it. He was brought back down to earth as something behind him exploded.

“Confederacy’s a-comin’!” Jay heard Grey-hair yell from somewhere.

Quickly he broke into a sprint, heading at full speed towards his Space Wasp, parked just behind another larger ship. He was relieved to see it in one piece.

More DSC helicopters flew by, these ones bearing the insignia of the Retalan planetary defense. Jay traced their origin to the west, from the town of Caulfield. The trailer park was east, “behind” the town. In the month he had been here much had changed, most notably the South Retalan rebels that had moved into the park some six days ago. They had demanded a tithe from every resident of the park for their “protection” by the new Free State of South Retale. Jay had paid them his last R$50. Now they would have to follow through on their promise. If the DSC won the town Jay and everyone in the trailer park would be arrested and their possessions confiscated. Jay had no intention of staying.

He popped on his goggles and was about to enter his ship when a burst of gunfire broke out and a heavy hand landed on his shoulder. He twisted and first saw the three rebel soldiers, then, further back over Caulfield, DSC marines fast roping down from a hovering helicopter. The rebels had their faces up to their eyes covered with scarves portraying the new South Retalan flag – a solid green background, with the flag of the DSC split in two in the center. They were wearing flak vests and pants looted from DSC soldiers, and each carried their own rifle.

“Hey.” Said the one with his hand on Jay’s shoulder.

“H-hey.” Jay muttered back. The two men shifted to block Jay from the back.

“Why aren’t you on the barricades? Caulfield’s under attack.” A helicopter hovered, a mechanical voice reading out instructions to get down onto the ground, hands on your head. Jay saw rebels running west through the trailer park to defend Caulfield.

“I’m not from here. I want to leave.”

“You’re in South Retale, it’s your duty to defend it.” The rebel in front let his hand off Jay’s shoulder as the two behind Jay clasped him firmly in theirs. The helicopter’s voice droned on. He could hear the shouts and gunfire as rebels clashed with DSC and RPD inside the town.

“I’m not from here. I have to leave.” Jay said, wriggling. “You should probably leave too.”

The rebel in front of Jay was about to say something when the helicopter hovering above them opened fire. The first burst of bullets hit one of the rebels holding Jay from behind.  Jay twisted away from the other rebel’s loosening grip.  Jay leapt at the rebel in front, the one who had grabbed him as he reached for something in his left pocket. Jay twisted once more, bringing an elbow around to his temple. The helicopter flew by overhead, spitting out fire as it flew. As he climbed into the Wasp, Jay saw Fat-man and Gold-glasses ducked for cover behind a pile of scrap metal.

Inside the Space Wasp, Jay gunned the engines as fast as their failing turbines would allow them. Looking to the west, he saw nothing but columns of DSC moving through the streets of Caulfield, with helicopters and even a few tanks backing them up. He rotated himself to the east, the sun gleaming off the hull of the Wasp. As he turned to the cosmos, the space was clear, unobstructed by the now gone DSC ships. He knew that one frigate was still in orbit, but it was nowhere in sight. Jay took his chances. He flew off from Retale’s surface just as the first DSC troops poured into the trailer park.

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The hum of the DSCS-GANYMEDE bathed Weston in warm vibrations as he moved through its halls. The cabin lights cast a blue glow, giving the hallways an almost ethereal ambiance. Weston, having served on the Ganymede for quite some time, had gotten used to it, but the new recruits often found themselves wandering aimlessly in circles around the serpentine passages. As he walked past a viewscreen he paused, looking over at the lazy movement of clouds above the oceans of Retale. The spring this year was an exceptionally nice one, with constant high pressure over the continents. South Retale was exceptionally nice this year, despite being an unending source of strife. Well, perhaps unending wasn’t the most accurate term. He’d heard that the DSC, supported by the Retalan planetary defense was to capture Stronach within the day. Of course, days here were long, so that still left plenty of time for bloodshed.

Besides the sluggishly rotating planet, the skies were empty. The light frigate DSCS-IO and Battlecruiser DSCS-LIVERPOOL had warped out of the system yesterday, responding to a Wheel attack on the planet of Andyal, just beside the DSC-aligned, but largely independent world of Kaisari. Weston briefly recalled hearing about another DSC Battlecruiser dispatched to Kaisari recently.

The briefing room was nearby, and was filling up as Weston arrived. It was a small room in the style of and amphitheatre, with five rows rising up as they went further back. At the center stood a podium, reserved for the ship’s Captain. Ganymede’s captain, a miserly fellow named Takewontson took the podium. Weston sat at the center of the third row.

The briefing was a plan of action for the Ganymede’s next few weeks. As soon as Stronach was taken, the Ganymede would move out to support (if necessary) the DSC at Andyal. The Battlecruiser DSCS-PRETORIA was engaged against Wheel of unknown designation at the time, and the DSCS-IO and DSCS-LIVERPOOL would arrive soon, as you all should know. The carrier DSCS-PORTUGAL should arrive soon to pick up the DSC troops on the planet, as Stronach has just been taken.

The briefing room broke out into a brief clap. A talkative second lieutenant, Samuel, with whom Weston often ate lunch, asked for some details. The captain explained that after the death of Brigadier General Sidlis in Keyhearth, Colonel Garrett Scott came in charge of the DSC and allied planetary defenses on Retale. He took Caulfield yesterday, then continued his blitzkrieg straight southwest to Stronach. His forces had taken it about an hour ago. More claps from the assembled masses. South Retale was now firmly under the control of the DSC and would be governed exclusively by it. North Retale would retain its autonomy under Governor Breton. Anyway, said the Captain, back on track. The Wheel has also stepped up border raids on other worlds on the Outer Rim of the DSC and has been moving into various independent worlds in between Wheel-controlled and DSC-controlled areas.

The briefing continued for another half hour. On his way out Samuel caught Weston in the hallway.

“Man, the way the captain talked about Colonel Scott makes him sound like a damn Superhero.” Weston didn’t really know of the Colonel or his exploits, so he just shrugged.

“You know he was leading the mission to catch that scavenger? The ‘search for the bunker-class fighter’?”

Now, Weston perked up. Samuel began to walk and Weston walked alongside him.

“No, I haven’t heard about that. What’s the deal?”

“Well, yeah, he knew the guy was on Retale, and- He stole a Wheel battery, by the way, that’s why they’re after him- Anyway, uh, he knew he was on Retale, and started a planet-wide search. Next thing you know, civil war breaks out and he’s called off to lead the troops. Now, a whole month later, he’s taking this town of Caulfield, right, that the captain mentioned? Then, vroom!” The second lieutenant made a take-off motion with his hand. “Bunker class fighter flies off right above him. He’s only got helicopters that are no good for space flight. And get this, the Liverpool? It was supposed to be watching the planet for that bunker class fighter. Too bad though, because it’s gone! You’d think this Scott guy would have organized this better, but he’s not really in control of anything.”

Weston was surprised, but concealed his emotions. This was the first he had heard about this. Weston had been told that the DSC presence on the planet was due to the civil unrest, not because of the search for a scavenger named Jay.

“Why didn’t we catch him, then, when he left the planet yesterday? Where’s he gone?” Weston asked.

“Shit, I dunno where he’s gone. Probably to another outer rim world, where neither the Wheel nor the DSC got much presence. Why didn’t we catch him? Hah hah, he’s a clever guy. We’re in geostationary orbit, we stay still relative to ourselves but we don’t stay in one spot over the planet. Like, weather satellites, they’re in geosynchronous orbit, which means they’re always over the same spot relative to the planet, so they always know the weather at that one place. Anyway, I don’t know if it was luck or whatever, but he took off at the time when we were smack dab over the other end of Retale. Took off in the opposite direction. But Scott’s been reassigned to the hunt, now that this whole rebellion business is over.”

Weston was troubled. He moved back through the Ganymede’s halls, second lieutenant Samuel sharing with him his thoughts on the weather, the arrest of magistrate Atter, and the looming war between the DSC and the Wheel. Weston smiled and was silent, his thoughts swirling around inside his head.

Monday, December 26, 2011

Untitled: Episode 2 Part 2

Read yesterday's post in case you forgot something. Hopefully I haven't fucked up the continuity.
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                The right, honourable magistrate Paulus Atter watched with glee as the chaos unfolded on the other side of his third floor office window. From his perch in the South Retale parliament building, he could see with amazing clarity how Stronach, the regional capital of South Retale, exploded into fire and flames. He observed as throngs of protestors swarmed the lines of the DSC military police, as they threw rocks and Molotov cocktails, and as more and more policemen were called onto the scene. He knew, from reports he had gotten, that similar such protests had started up all around the continent, all against DSC authority in South Retale. It had started as a dispute over the Caroe Islands, but would certainly end in open insurgency against the Deep Space Confederacy.  

He turned away from the window, his hands in each other behind his back. He exited his finely crafted magistrate’s office and moved towards the stairwell through the hallways of the deserted parliament building. He hadn’t called any sessions since the protests started. As he drew further away from the window, the noise of screaming men and woman, the pifs and pafs of rubber bullets and the sharp cracks of glass breaking grew more and more dull. But then, as he came back to the window of some minister’s second floor office, the noise returned. A man carrying a burning DSC flag behind him was running at full speed from a group of riot police, who eventually caught up to and tackled him. Those officers were soon surrounded by other protestors, who in turn were set upon by even more policemen. He saw armoured trucks pulling up around the edges of the civilian mob, and troops carrying actual rifles exiting. The crowd pulled back. Paulus stood silent.

He did not know who had fired the first shot, or how many on each side had been killed. But, at the end of this bloody day, only two weeks after the first reports of disturbances on the Caroe islands, the South Retale insurgents had pushed out the DSC from Stronach. The first city, on a DSC planet, free from DSC regulations in a hell of a long time, as far as Paulus knew. Now, he stood on a pedestal, and gathered before him were the hopes for the new free state of South Retale, in the forms of thousands of armed citizens.

“My people!” He shouted, to a cheering crowd. “You have been treated as second class for too long! The DSC is corrupt and traitorous, seeking to break the backs of those unlucky few stranded on the outskirts of their dictatorial empire! They wish to use Retale as a planet of the slaves, to fund their unjust wars and further conquest of a galaxy that they have no right to own!”

The crowd was delirious. Shots were fired into the air from looted weapons.

“And our brothers to the north, instead of joining us in rightful combat, heeled to their corrupt masters, wishing to willingly continue in their slavery! They are blind, and, like the rest, they must be made to see the truth!”

                Paulus’ arms were raised, his chest heaving. He squinted in the bright sunlight, the sky all blue, and no clouds. The innumerable people of Stronach cheered at his every word. He felt reinvigorated, a new man. Deep down, he had always resented the Confederacy, but he had never actually expected this to be happening. Some would call him a madman, he thought. Others, a visionary.     

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                “Henry, you’re small blind. Jay, big blind.” The fat man grunted as he dealt each member at the table two cards. Jay dropped in his twenty Retale dollars. The light of the lamp in the middle of the table flickered, the wind blowing the flame this way and that. It was a warm, spring night, and pitch black besides. The other players at the table checked their cards and placed their bets. As the flop was turned, the grey haired man to Jay’s right spoke up.
                “Y’all hear about them rebels in Stronach?” Jay raised his eyebrows, but said nothing.

                “Rebels? The hell are you talking about?” Said the dark skinned man across from Jay.

                “Them ones in Stronach, that’s who I’m talkin’ about.”  Reiterated Grey-hair. “They kicked out them DSC boys there just yes’urday. Saw ‘t on th’ news.”

                “Shit man, you serious? I wanted to get over there tomorrow and pick up some stuff.”

                “Not a chance of that.” Said the man with gold rimmed glasses. Jay’s eyes darted every which way as he kept track of the conversation. “The DSC has the place locked up tighter than a nun on a Sunday.”

                “Damn. Partner’s gonna be pissed.” Dark-skin cursed beneath his breath.

                Jay was staying at a “trailer park” just outside of the small town of Caulfield, South Retale. Trailer parks were illegal on Retale under DSC edict, as they allowed for illicit gatherings of civilian spacecraft.  As of some five-odd years ago, civilians on Retale were forced to land their ships at spaceports. Jay opted for the illegal but more discreet option.

                “DSC’s going crazy around the whole planet. Got one or two frigates floatin’ round here.” Grey-hair said.

                “Two, and a Battlecruiser.” Said Gold-glasses. “They got the place fully surrounded. No one’s getting out of here.” Jay winced at the words. No one saw behind his red-tinted goggles.

                “Damn!” Dark-skin cursed again. “I have another partner on New Pallas who’s expecting me next week.”

                “Was thinkin’, though,” Chimed in Grey-hair, “Ain’t two weeks a bit short t’ get enough guys for in-sur-gen-cy? Whachu think, Jay?”

                Jay shrugged.

                “You lived here all your life?” Gold-glasses asked Grey-hair.
               
                “Sure have. Well, I done a lot of travelin’ and I ain’t lived in this trailer park, but South Retale, born n’ raised.”

                “Then you should know the days here are fifty-fives hours long. Back where I’m from, days are twenty hours. Two weeks mean different things here and there.”

                “I ain’t stupid, I know that. When I say two weeks, I know two weeks.”
               
                “Are you guys gonna play or what?” Barked Fat-man. The other men muttered their various agreements. He turned to Jay, and Jay nodded.

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                DSC Colonel Garrett Scott received a message, delivered to him by an exhausted DSC soldier from the third floor. General Tybalt upstairs had been killed by a South Retale sniper and you, sir, are the new ranking officer. Also, “upstairs” is no longer safe and everyone from there is here on the second floor. Yes sir, thank you sir.
               
                Garrett had been ducked beneath the window of the police station at the time. He was on his way to Stronach to respond to a minor civil disobedience issue. He was travelling through the lowland town of Armstrong, South Retale, halfway to his destination, when he received word the capital had been overtaken by insurgents. They stopped in town, awaiting further orders, and were attacked. New orders had not arrived for the last two hours.

                Garrett crawled on all fours away from the front face of the police station. Three soldiers were ducked in front of the other three windows, waiting for the latest bout of machine-gun fire to end. There were ten other soldiers on this floor, all except two at other windows. The two were at the station’s armoury, looking for weapons.

                On the third floor there were another ten men, all arranged at windows. There were nine, now, with the Lieutenant dead, and they were all down in the stairwell to the second floor.

                Down on the first floor there were twelve men batting down the hatches, for a full platoon of 36 DSC soldiers. Garrett’s men were veterans, taken straight from the inner rim of the Confederacy. He had no information on how many were outside, but they had surrounded them in the police station and had a machine-gun set up at the front. His men on the second floor had managed to stay hidden until the gun stopped firing, and were now firing back. Garrett crawled into the armoury.

                The two soldiers there, a woman and a man were digging through a weapons closet. There were fifteen or so pistols on the floor and three or four rifles or shotguns. All firearms these days were misnomers, as they didn’t use “fire” at all: just like the MAC cannons in space, they shot magnetically accelerated projectiles, so that they could be used anywhere, even in space or on planets with volatile atmospheres.

                “Hey.” Garrett said. The two turned around. The woman was private Torr and the man private Valkyn. Their features except for their eyes were hidden behind their uniforms and helmets.
               
                “Colonel Scott.” Garrett pointed out. “I’m your new CO. What’s in there?”
               
                Garrett pointed to a barred, metal weapons closet.

                “No idea.” Said private Torr. “It’s locked up tight, though, so it must be good.”

                “Alright.” Garrett said. Something exploded outside. “Open it up. I’ll be back.”

                Back down on his hands and knees, Garrett crawled back over to the window. The machine gun had not started up again. In fact, all was quiet as Garrett peeked out.
               
                A shot out grocery store stared back at him, a car burning in front of it. The store’s windows had been shot out. He couldn’t see anyone or anything except smoking holes all around the bullet ridden main street.  Both ways down, the main street was deserted. A dog barked somewhere in the distance. It was a bright afternoon, without a cloud in the sky. No one else had been shot, so the Sniper must have been behind the police station. Far away, Garrett heard the whir of helicopter blades.

Sunday, December 25, 2011

An Untitled RECAP

And so it rises from the grave. I think I owe you a big, big summary, since this commercial break was about three months long. Part 2 will prolly come sometime tomorrow, 'cause it's like 10:00 where I am now.

PREVIOUSLY, ON UNTITLED
Jay, a scavenger operating outside the boundaries of the law, scavenges a dead ship belonging to the Wheel faction, a faction directly in opposition to the Deep Space Confederacy, the controllers of the majority of deep space. The Wheel under Admiral Landover show up and fire upon Jay's "Space Wasp", knowing he has stolen a piece of their highly secretive technology. The DSC under Stefan Sonett appear shortly after, and, thinking the Wheel are attacking them, fire back. A battle ensues that the DSC loses, even though Sonett manages to destroy Landover's battlecruiser, the EXPULSION. In the confusion, Jay manages to escape the system to the (relative) safety of Retale, the nearest planet.

There, Jay meets up with Weston Kerchow, a corporal in the DSC and Jay's friend since childhood. He shares with Jay what he knows about what happened at Carnegia, the planet around which Jay found the Wheel ship. Meanwhile, there is unrest in South Retale as the magistrate, Paulus Atter, seeks soveirgnty and independence from the DSC controlled north. Jay leaves North Retale for South just as DSC Colonel Garrett Scott arrives in his pursuit.

ALSO, PERHAPS A CHARACTER AND LOCATION REF. SHEET WOULD BE USEFUL

ORGANIZATIONS
DSC: Deep Space Confederacy. Confederation of hundreds of planets in deep space. Loosely bound and headed by a president. Strong regular army and navy supported by irregular auxillary forces from each of its planets.

Wheel: A splinter faction, but still powerful. Controls about half as many planets as the DSC. Technology is quite advanced for the time, and usually disintegrates into minute, unidentifiable particles when cut off from a power source, making it nearly impossible to retrieve.

LIVING PEOPLE:
Jay: "Protagonist". Scavenger and part outlaw. Stole a piece of Wheel technology. Pilots a bunker class fighter he calls the "Space Wasp"

Admiral Landover: An admiral of the Wheel Fleet. His ship, the EXPULSION, was destroyed in battle.

Captain Stefan Sonett: The captain of the DSCS-PRETORIA, a battlecruiser. He destroys Landover's EXPULSION during the action at Carnegia.

Corporal Weston Kerchow: DSC soldier and one of Jay's oldest friends. Leaks him info from time to time.

Colonel Garett Scott: DSC officer. In charge of the search for Jay, even though he doesn't know it's Jay he's looking for, just a bunker class fighter.

DEAD PEOPLE:
Alexi Perrobs: EXPULSION's comms. officer. Was killed when EXPULSION was destroyed by DSCS-PRETORIA

LOCATIONS:
Carnegia: Asteroid-belted planet. The Wheel battleship DELIVERANCE was stranded here. Site of "The Action at Carnegia", first hostilities between Wheel and DSC.

Retale: Temperate Planet. Divvied up into North and South. North is governed by DSC approved Chadwick Breton, South is managed by visionary magistrate Paulus Atter. See map.

Thursday, December 22, 2011

And so

We crawl out of our holes, facing the true coming of winter, but looking forward to the slow expansion of the day.

Also, school is done for the year. Yippee!

Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Daniel Tovbis exits the nation

Hey guys.
As per Tovbis family custom, we're getting the fuck out of dodge this winter, and we're off to the Canary Islands!











The Island we're going to be staying on is Tenerife, a beautiful tourist Island-y place. One of my dad's old rich Russian friend owns a few villas and he's invited all of his (and my dad's) Ukrainian schoolchums over for a family get-together. Also, he has a daughter whom my mom hates. Damn.

That's all I've really got to say this year. Haven't researched this trip as well as I have earlier ones, but I'm sure it'll turn out okay.

Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Daniel Tovbis reaches for Harvard

I'm working hard on this application the same way I worked hard preparing for the IB entrance exam - which is to say, not at all.
Then again, considering my mediocre grades and singular, lonely teacher recommendation, I made it in here and I'm doing okay, so maybe Harvard ain't that much of a reach after all.
Hah.
Hah hah hah.
Hah.
They should really have an entrance exam for Harvard.

Saturday, December 3, 2011

Things to do this weekend

I'll cross them off as I finish them
1. Gatsby essay
2. OUAC (Waterloo Ac Sci, McMaster Health Sci, UofT Life Sci)
3. CommonApp

Thursday, December 1, 2011

The slow degeneration of the nation

...into the inhospitable confines of winter.
Although I vocally let everyone know that winter is my least favourite season, the truth is I have a love hate relationship with it. I hate winter when it's 8:00 am and I'm walking to the bus stop: It's pitch black and howling wind outside. It's terrible. Same goes for when I'm coming home at 4:30 and you'd think it's the 30 days of night north of the arctic circle. And keep in mind I have to walk home a kilometer every day.

I hate being cold, it is one of the worst feelings for me. That's why you might notice me already all bundled up in winter coats and hats built for -20 when it's 6 degrees outside. I enjoy being toasty.

I like winter when I wake up, and it's full bright, no clouds, the sun is shining, and there's puffy snow laying all over the neighbourhood. It's cool, but not windy, and you don't even really have to wear your puffy-ass jacket even if it is -20 outside. I love to ski or skate in this weather. I've gotten pretty good at it. However, days like this come once in a blue moon, so the equilibrium of my love <--> hate relationship lies far to the right, ba-dum tish.

So yeah, that's Tovbis' soapbox for the time being. I've been doing okay, I think.